Very nice, Andrew, esp. with that brooding Ritsos
quote hanging over it. The silence "under foot under
hoof" also gave me a shiver. Agree with Doug about the
last stanza, though. Something seems needed there, but
what, I don't know either--just something less
prosaic, I guess.
Candice
It's not for you to know
but to weep and wonder
when the death of your civilization precedes you
(Neko Case)
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