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From: "TheOldMole" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Monday, November 05, 2007 7:25 AM
Subject: Re: 2 poems
In CV, I wonder if the fourth stanza is the best place to take the
haunting memories of the first three...?
As I see it, those memories, personal and political, have much to do with
the wannabe/hasbeen mechanism. Otherwise, LA is not the best place to take
someone from SF, but it offers a certain perspective.
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