Yeah, ditch the last line. Good idea, Candice >g<
Andrew
On 05/11/2007, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> yeah I'll recant, it's a fine rhythmic read. the end rather too faux-grim.
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> KS
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> On 02/11/2007, Peter Ciccariello <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > This disappeared winter of the poet
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> > Seven years and bones that guard the house
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