I enjoyed this, especially the first stanza, Judy.
Wasn't at all sure of the last line of St 2, & felt it lost some of its
active power in the 3rd.
Picked it up again, in that short line last stanza.
Doug
On 24-Oct-07, at 7:49 AM, Judy Prince wrote:
> Ceremonious
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