I like the quite tone of the poem. There is nothing to be irate about.
On 10/21/07, Frederick Pollack <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> From: "joe green" <[log in to unmask]>
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> Sent: Sunday, October 21, 2007 4:35 PM
> Subject: Re: "Last Things"
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> Wow. is Immortal Diamond.
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> No - only now that I've revised it, it is - ("(Not)" rather than
> "(Wouldn't)" etc. Thanks!! (Old friends have written irately insisting
> they will NOT talk about sex all the time. Or saying they've been doing
> so
> all their lives.)
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