I agree, this is much better
Janet
> The dogs bark
> at intruders.
> Which anyone is.
>
> The goldfinch sings
> on the other side
> of the window.
>
> I open the shutters,
> close them. Is there
> another side
>
> to this wall?
> I am uninhabited.
> Come in.
> *****************
>
> Thank you, Andrew & Kasper.
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www.proximity.webhop.net
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