if this really is about child-abuse, or touching on that theme, then
this poem is more of a failure than I thought; though that sounds
harsh, it's not that big a deal because it's OK as far as it goes, as
I already opined earlier. but there's NOTHING to indicate child abuse
except for a reader's macabre mind. you can trust PmcM for one of
those, I see. (!)
KS
On 19/08/07, Lynda Nash <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Thanks for your comments, they can but only help a novice such as I!
>
> I was rather nervous of going for the child abuse angle (do you think it
> is overdone these days - almost cliche?).
>
> I will now set about revising the poem. I'll let you know how I get on.
>
>
> I'd love to post another poem so you can take it to bits, she said in a
> perverse, masochistic kind of way!
>
> Lynda
>
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