It doesn't seem lame to me, Sharon. Maybe if you put
it away for awhile, then read it again, it will look
as good to you as it does to me--Candice
--- Judy Prince <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> "teacups of light/ thin as a veil"----so nice,
> Sharon.
>
> Judy
>
> ---- sharon brogan <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > a proper life
> >
> > cat on the hearth
> > dog at the door
> >
> > boots at the stoop
> > cows at the stile
> >
> > thick coffee mugs
> > coat on the nail
> >
> > chores to be done
> > eggs in the barn
> >
> > hutch full of china
> > rugs on the floor
> >
> > teacups of light
> > thin as a veil
> >
> > beds deep & wide
> > feathers and down
> >
> > done with the work
> > stars after dark
> >
> > *************************
> >
> > on a british mystery, one character promised
> another 'a proper life' -- i
> > seem to have a deep traditional streak in me,
> because this is what emerged.
> > it seemed ok when i wrote it; now it seems lame.
> >
> > comments welcomed
> >
> >
> > --
> >
> > ~ SB =^..^=
> >
> > http://www.sbpoet.com
>
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