Phew, thanks Bob, Doug, and all who responded. Lotsa room for thought
here! Such a good result to have this much response - that's the best
part of this list, Lynda! >g<
Andrew
On 17/08/07, Bob Marcacci <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> well, it gets worse with this draft, Andrew... seconding Douglas on the
> previous form's allure...
>
> > In the shrill sound of cicadas
>
> weak first line... i agree with P about the sound description here... not
> very inventive...
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