Well the havoc was that all the words had gone been eaten up-very sad
-tragic in fact -I shall cry :-)
Cheers P
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Subject: Re: snap pat ^^^Wednesday, 15 August 2007
what about the slugs/snails?? you open with them wreaking havoc, but
then there's no havoc to be seen.
a WONDERFUL concept though, do work this into shape
KS
On 15/08/07, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> WORDS
>
> he went out
> to find some words
> in his garden
> but the slugs
> had wrought havoc
> and the snails
> had done their worst
> closely looking
> at the bushes
> he found some
> but they were not ripe
> or others overripe
> had fallen squashed
> in a sorry state
> and a flock of birds
> had cleared the rest
>
> pmcmanus
> q126
>
> Wednesday, 15 August 2007
>
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