good ending, the rest is unengaging & unfortunately flaccid
KS
On 15/08/07, cooee <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> In the Dark
>
>
> Waking in the night,
> listening: nothing,
> silence, no traffic,
>
> no weather even,
> not even snoring
> (now Iım awake),
>
> peace; then a far
> faint cry fading
> as of a small creature
> in the fangs of another.
>
>
>
> 6.30am, Wednesday 15 August 2007
>
> Max Richards
> Doncaster, Victoria
>
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