oh right it was a snap. sorry
On 15/08/07, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> good ending, the rest is unengaging & unfortunately flaccid
>
> KS
>
> On 15/08/07, cooee <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > In the Dark
> >
> >
> > Waking in the night,
> > listening: nothing,
> > silence, no traffic,
> >
> > no weather even,
> > not even snoring
> > (now Iım awake),
> >
> > peace; then a far
> > faint cry fading
> > as of a small creature
> > in the fangs of another.
> >
> >
> >
> > 6.30am, Wednesday 15 August 2007
> >
> > Max Richards
> > Doncaster, Victoria
> >
>
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