Yep, I liked it too. Andrew
On 02/08/07, Judy Prince <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> "teacups of light/ thin as a veil"----so nice, Sharon.
>
> Judy
>
> ---- sharon brogan <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > a proper life
> >
> > cat on the hearth
> > dog at the door
> >
> > boots at the stoop
> > cows at the stile
> >
> > thick coffee mugs
> > coat on the nail
> >
> > chores to be done
> > eggs in the barn
> >
> > hutch full of china
> > rugs on the floor
> >
> > teacups of light
> > thin as a veil
> >
> > beds deep & wide
> > feathers and down
> >
> > done with the work
> > stars after dark
> >
> > *************************
> >
> > on a british mystery, one character promised another 'a proper life' -- i
> > seem to have a deep traditional streak in me, because this is what emerged.
> > it seemed ok when i wrote it; now it seems lame.
> >
> > comments welcomed
> >
> >
> > --
> >
> > ~ SB =^..^=
> >
> > http://www.sbpoet.com
>
--
Andrew
http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
http://www.inblogs.net/hispirits
http://www.flickr.com/photos/aburke/
|