Thanks for your comments, they can but only help a novice such as I!
I was rather nervous of going for the child abuse angle (do you think it
is overdone these days - almost cliche?).
I will now set about revising the poem. I'll let you know how I get on.
I'd love to post another poem so you can take it to bits, she said in a
perverse, masochistic kind of way!
Lynda
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