I like it too, Janet, with Fred's usual sense of going into the ruins
to come....
But I can't even begin to see the final stanza, for example, as
anything but a poem. That's how he works these things.... (I find most
of the line breaks, eg, doing something....)
Doug
On 12-Jul-07, at 9:46 PM, Janet Jackson wrote:
> I wonder why it needs to be in verse, or lineated, or
> whatever we want to call it. Why not write it in prose?
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