I'm really taken by the way this piece uses its white spaces.
I was wondering about the line, "bright as noon on the painted desert" and
the following words, "vegas at midnight" - I wasn't sure how to connect them
- but then I began to see that I could keep on reading and my wondering what
to do becomes part of the poem!
Bob
Bob, glad I could pull you into the poem.
Thanks.
Smiles.
Gary
Gary's book, A River Transformed at http://www.lulu.com/content/178110
Gar's blog at http://garydawg.blogspot.com/
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