Doug,
I like it just the way it is below. Packs a wallop!
Candice
--- andrew burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Doug - I'd take the articles out. Maybe keep the
> first 'a' ('a thing')
> ... Androo
>
>
>
> On 31/05/07, Douglas Barbour
> <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > she couldnt say a thing
> > she couldnt tell
> > & those who wouldnt listen knew
> > she had nothing
>
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