Kasper,
Thanks for the insightful reading. My visit to Suburban Hospital on
Wednesday did distract me from revising the completely different text I had
intended to post, though I wasn't ill. The previous week I had been
afflicted by a variety of digestive system issues, but resisted suggestions
that I go to the emergency room. So with "hospital" forcing itself upon my
attention, I did treat words which came to my attention by slicing off the
first and last letters, after the example of Peter Riley. But I'm not
treating one particular text. The source of the second line could have
been "heatco", while the third was originally "nausea", though "caused"
makes a certain amount of sense as well. "Sick" was the source of the
fourth line, while I believe the solo "i" of the fifth line was originally
a whole line of "i's". Or was it "vip"?
Barry
On Thu, 17 May 2007 22:42:45 +0300, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
>this seems very clever: it appears to express the gradual
>disintegration of logic &/or the capacity for speech when in an
>untoward state (drunk, alcohol-poisoned..). I see HOSPITAL in the
>title, CHAMPAGNE in the first line, CAUSED in the third.. the rest are
>harder to unravel. but that's the fun. good stuff Barry
>
>KS
>
>On 17/05/07, Barry Alpert <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> OSPITA
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>> hampagn
>> eatc
>> ause
>> ic
>> i
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>> Barry Alpert / Silver Spring, MD US / 5-17-07 (10:14 AM)
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