I love this piece, it's light, airy and elegant. It has a lightness of
being. Is it me, or were once yr poems oil paintings, and now you've
struck a vein of water-colour?
On 5/16/07, Mark Weiss <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> This here aint no
> pitter patter storm
> Mr. Kern, upon us suddenly
> from the south,
> the sky become
> a large green threat. A shame,
> though, to close the windows,
> and lose the sweet breeze.
>
> I have joined
> for the moment
> the complex aerodynamics
> of leaves.
>
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