Ok with the positive comments
On 5/16/07, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> this is outstanding. lush, & outstanding.
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> KS
>
> On 16/05/07, Caleb Cluff <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > My earthen bride
> >
> > whose lovers sink their blackstick fingers
> >
> > whose thighs gutter the sailing world
> >
> > whose mouth strains the air of impurity
> >
> > whose whims are silk-quartz unbound from clay
> >
> > dendrites of gold and of moss marking their surface
> >
> > whose ankles strain above the piazza loreto cobbles
> >
> > whose mouth is smooth agate, and births onyx
> >
> > whose fingers are rosemary and blood
> >
> > whose vision coloured and colourless as mirth
> >
> > gags our lies half-spoken, our helpless, virtuous lies,
> >
> > our lies meaning well, or meaning ill:
> >
> >
> > I search, I am searching for you, at dawn at dusk
> >
> > among the thrusting mushrooms, in the wet grasses
> >
> > along the sandy courses, the shilling-edged ravines
> >
> > through the prickly acacia, the boxthorn and rose-apple
> >
> > among the grey horses, the black and the bay
> >
> > along their steaming flanks, avoiding the carnelian eye
> >
> > seeking to touch your forehead with my partisan thumbs
> >
> > though I am worn thin, the sun moving steadily from me
> >
> > and sweetness becoming the vaguer emotion...
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
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