yeah, the spaces work for it. & the 'aloud' allows for so much...
Doug
On 9-May-07, at 11:33 AM, Tina Bass wrote:
> For some reason, as soon as I had sent it, I wanted to change it. I
> think this works better?
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> ripe from dreaming
> asks: why does the wind?
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> he is aloud
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> unused to static
> listening moves to words
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> stretching the true
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> mist rusting brain
> facts – not sated – swollen like pigeons
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