Well, I just replied to Tad's post, but the poetryetc gods refused me
because it was somehow
'text/enriched' despite the fact I was just replying.
What I said, Kasper, was:
For some reason Kasper's poems always arrive in my mailbox as prose, &
hard to find the line breaks. I agree with Tad, but would go further:
remove every 'is' & the whole thing would go a lot better....
Doug
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Peace isn't even as good a sales item
as poetry.
W. H. Ferry
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