I am not really into long poems Arthur but this one takes me on a journey
and I actually feel I am there with the narrator. It is wriiten with care
and with great sensitivity and has much to offer the reader,bwsally j
>From: Arthur Seeley <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
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>Subject: New Sub: The Rock
>Date: Wed, 4 Apr 2007 15:37:45 +0100
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> The Rock
> Under the Cretan sun mirages dance
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> over the glittering road. A path forks off
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> to dip through a gloomy underpass,
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> from where it trails through back ways
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> towards Stavromenos of the white church
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> and dusty supermarket.
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> Beyond the reach of bees,
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> a wilt of dying flowers
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> - hum of passing traffic.
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>
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> I step from cool shade
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> into hammering sun
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> to stand upon an anvil of old roads,
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> stopped by heaps of debris.
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> Away from the main road silence is intense,
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> air hot and thick with soil's vapours.
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>
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> A white church looms
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> through a stand of tall pines-
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> ants debate bone or seed.
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> I scramble over heaped rubble,
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> scooped from the earth
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> to leave a drain that guides winter storms
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> and spring's swift melt seawards.
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> Sun pins me in the dust.
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> I am an ember.
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> .
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> The road bends,
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> then stops at the edge of the drain;
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> a litter of rocks.
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> I teeter a path where there is no path.
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> White dust coats all; leg, arm and thistle leaf;
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> flicker of a passing swallow.
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> An old woman, black as a beetle,
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> turns at the corner of her house,
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> scuttles into the fluttering cool of lemon trees and vines.
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> Cicadas stir,
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> call cave on my shadow
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> from the dry grasses of the verge.
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> A tethered goat, one horn shattered ragged,
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> dances on small feet, bleats,
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> butts at my intrusion into the lull of his day.
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> This is not the time to be out.
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>Locals sprawl and sweat in sleep
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>or potter in lemon groves, closeted in shade.
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> I am a mad dog,
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> loitering to savour the stink of old goat,
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> under a noonday sun.
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>One rock in all that rock
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>shows a thin line of fracture.
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>It is no bigger than my head
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>round as a fruit.
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>Its rough skin pocked
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>by its descent down the centuries.
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> The goat's bell chimes flat
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> as he shakes his beard.
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> A fly tells beads of my sweat.
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>I part the rock as I would a cut melon.
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> First light floods
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> to illumine dazzling striations,
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> set there by ancient silts,
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> laid down by run of lost rivers
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> and sift of forgotten seas.
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> I view a new world of gold and purple lands,
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> whorls of ochre and lilac,
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> painted deserts and sweeping umber prairies.
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> The afternoon is still and hot,
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> empty and silent as the ruined house
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> with curled paint and cracked panes.
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> Pale in the day sky
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> the moon sets into the sea -
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> a curtain falls back.
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