Gavin, well done; but is this an internet branch of a literary
magazine, or just a free site where one can post poetry (and,
apparently, 'Jokes' & 'Rap')? I'm quite certain that this sort of
exposure isn't considered publication.
whatsmore (not to rain on your parade!), the poem is rather childish &
lacking, despite its undoubtedly sincere subject; would you be
interested in some critique? because this piece needs it.
KS
On 25/04/07, Gavin Fagan <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Wake me up before you go, go
> Words from a song
> Thay keep ringing in my head
> Time after time again
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> Days are now long
> Nights even more so
> Each moment seems to drag
> Reminding me of the love I once had
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> Together the years were total joy
> Comprised of love
> At least for me
> It would seem not for you
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> I never knew
> You didn't say
> Kept it all within
> Living a secret life
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> We went to bed lying
> Arm in arm
> The morning broke sunny
> Your side was cold
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> I looked and looked
> You were no where to be found
> I wish you had told me
> Wake me up before you go, go!
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