Thanks for the feedback people.
> o major puke - songline might have once been pure - no any more
> say songline and every knowing person in oz just pukes
You're quite right of course Jen, and I'm sorry to have made you
lose your lunch. I hope you're feeling better now. ;-)
More seriously, I need to think whether that is the reaction I want.
Probably not, and definitely not right at the beginning of the poem.
What do you think about 'dreaming'? Isn't that just as bad?
I've been told off before for using it, although I think
that was because I'm not Aboriginal.
Janet
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Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
Poems at Proximity:
http://www.proximity.webhop.net
Our humanity is diminished when we have no mission
bigger than ourselves.
Bono
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