Could of fooled me--Candice
--- Halvard Johnson <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Lighten up, Candice. I welcome any and all comments.
> And I welcome any excuse to send along the H.G.
> Wells
> quotation.
>
> Hal
>
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> Halvard Johnson
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> On Apr 9, 2007, at 9:26 AM, MC Ward wrote:
>
> > When you post a poem here, the implicit assumption
> is
> > that you want comments on it. This kind of
> mannerless
> > response discourages feedback, so I, for one,
> won't
> > asume that you want any comments (or praise only)
> on
> > your posted poems. That makes even reading them a
> > waste of time, as is your time in posting them.
> >
> > Candice
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > --- Halvard Johnson <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >
> >> I second that notion.
> >>
> >> Hal
> >>
> >> "No passion in the world is equal to
> >> the passion to alter someone else's draft."
> >> --H. G. Wells
> >>
> >> Halvard Johnson
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> >> http://entropyandme.blogspot.com
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> >>
> >> On Apr 9, 2007, at 1:48 AM, Patrick Mc Manus
> wrote:
> >>
> >>> Roger These people who are cursed with wanting
> to
> >> rewrite other
> >>> peoples
> >>> snaps!!!!!! Ban them that's what I say :-)
> >>> Patrick de raynes park
> >>>
> >>> -----Original Message-----
> >>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics
> >>> [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> >>> Behalf Of Roger Day
> >>> Sent: 08 April 2007 17:37
> >>> To: [log in to unmask]
> >>> Subject: Re: snapshot -- revision
> >>>
> >>> how about this?
> >>>
> >>> Stepping into the morning
> >>> waxwing symphonies and crow concertos
> >>> air shivering, air trembling
> >>> sandman cacophony crowding out the daylight
> >>> ... why do we enter the future
> >>> with the past in our deep night pockets
> >>>
> >>> although you may not want to go that far ...
> >>>
> >>> On 4/6/07, sharon brogan <[log in to unmask]>
> >> wrote:
> >>>> thank you all for your critiques on this piece.
> >> here is a
> >>>> revision, which
> >>> i
> >>>> think is an improvement. i agree with andrew
> that
> >> it would be good
> >>>> to take
> >>>> the "I" from the first line, but can't see a
> way
> >> just yet:
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> I stepped from my house this morning,
> >>>> head crowded with voices from dreams,
> >>>> into shivering air, trembling air, symphonies
> >>>> of waxwings and robins, a percussion
> >>>> of crows ... Why do we enter the future
> >>>> with the past in our night pockets? Trees
> >>>> shook with squirrel passions; goldfish
> >>>> drifted from the pond's dark bottom
> >>>> into pale water. At dusk the mountains
> >>>> were scarved with mist.
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> On 4/4/07, sharon brogan <[log in to unmask]>
> >> wrote:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> I stepped from my house this morning,
> >>>>> head crowded with voices from dreams,
> >>>>> into shivering air, trembling air, symphonies
> >>>>> of waxwings and robins, a percussion
> >>>>> of crows ... Why do we enter the future
> >>>>> with the past in our night pockets? Trees
> >>>>> shook with squirrel passions; goldfish
> >>>>> drifted from the pond's dark bottom
> >>>>> up into pale water, reacquainting themselves
> >>>>> with the surface. The day passed slowly.
> >>>>> At dusk the mountains were scarved with mist.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> <http://www.sbpoet.com>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> --
> >>>> ~ SB =^..^=
> >>>>
> >>>> http://www.sbpoet.com
> >>>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> --
> >>> My Stuff: http://www.badstep.net/
> >>> "Patriotism is a virtue of the vicious." Oscar
> >> Wilde
> >>
> >
> >
> >
> >
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