I like the self-deprecating tone & the storytelling. Nice work.
jd
On 4/3/07, Patrick Mc Manus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> Hi Ken this sounds like me :-)
> Re your poem
> '' She remembered
> a nice old guy who made house calls
> and had a kindly bedside manner.
> If he's giving you a needle
> his touch matters more than his poetry.
>
> P Enjoyed the storytelling I like to give the needle when wriiting!!!and
> my
> poetry is touched cheers
> It's cold and dark here today
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Kenneth Wolman
> Sent: 01 April 2007 19:40
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: "Common Space"
>
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Joseph Duemer
Professor of Humanities
Clarkson University
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