Tina when I read it -I just also was surprised that no flagstones were
broken (of course I may have gotten the the wrong end of the stick!!)
P
ALTAR
neatened rubble casting clots
of exploding shadow stains
on each unbroken flag beneath
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Tina Bass
Sent: 04 April 2007 18:32
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Subject: snap Bass: ALTAR
This is intended to be part of a collection of small snaps about the Old
Cathedral in Coventry (destroyed during WW2). I started it last year, had a
lot of helpful comments from petc, and have just started to get excited by
it again. This section started to form a couple of days ago and has been
bugging me ever since. Let me know what you think.
ALTAR
neatened rubble casting clots
exploding shadow stains
each unbroken flag beneath
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