Yes for me this poem is quite outstanding Arthur. Bw sally j


>From: Arthur Seeley <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: WIP( Sally)
>Date: Fri, 23 Mar 2007 08:46:15 -0000
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>Thanks Sally. It is as yet unfinished and unpolished. The use of different 
>poetic forms starting with alliterative verse and then through terza rima 
>and Chaucerian rhyming couplets and the Shakesperian sonnet to the eventual 
>breakdown of form into the formless with occasional attempts to gather form 
>again is supposed to mirror our descent into chaos as I see it anyway. 
>There is a lot to do at it . Arthur
>----- Original Message ----- From: "Sally James" <[log in to unmask]>
>To: <[log in to unmask]>
>Sent: Thursday, March 22, 2007 9:06 PM
>Subject: Re: WIP
>
>
>>I am not really into long poems Arthur but this I really understand. I 
>>feel like this about things and do get quite frightened of the world ,of 
>>people. This just about sums up what I am feeling now, I say to my 
>>children and grandchildren that I cannot understand things anymore and 
>>seems you are the same. This poem is a legacy of our time and should be 
>>preserved for posterity, sally
>>
>>

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