Gavin you are a brave man to post here -I like this poem much better free-er
-do you belong to a local group that is a good arena to get feedback
Best wishes Patrick
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Gavin Fagan
Sent: 26 March 2007 05:27
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Subject: Loneliest Walk
Loneliest Walk
Silently I sit looking out to sea
Watching the waves
Foaming up
Breaking all around
Remembering those Summer nights
Bare foot across the sand
The tide lapping at our feet
Arm in arm
Quietly we'd sit
As the sun
Slowly sank in the distance
Now the clouds are dark
Tide no longer
Lapping at our feet
Waves angerly lashing
At the rocks all around
Unhurriedly I stand
Recalling the dark night
You left me
Step be step I walk
Bit by bit I feel the waves
As they climb
Until I have only
A picture of you
In my mind!
Written by Gavin WM Fagan 2007
Would like feed back on my poem, thanks.
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