I really enjoyed the language in this.
Not sure what the big deal is about "from" vs "off", although
it seems to be the point of the poem.
Janet
> The boy fell from the factory roof. Or off, singing as he went,
...
> to fall from. Or off.
>
> Caleb Cluff
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Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
Poems at Proximity:
http://www.proximity.webhop.net
Our humanity is diminished when we have no mission
bigger than ourselves.
Bono
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