Thanks Colin you are so right. best wishes sally j


>From: Colin Dewar <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: new sub Seeds of Love
>Date: Thu, 15 Feb 2007 18:30:34 -0000
>
>Please see sugg's in caps below. Nice use of flowers in a list of three, 
>leading up to the closing metaphor.
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>
>Colin
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>----- Original Message ----- From: "Sally James" <[log in to unmask]>
>To: <[log in to unmask]>
>Sent: Wednesday, February 14, 2007 8:04 AM
>Subject: new sub Seeds of Love
>
>Seeds of love
>>
>>There should be flowers in my house today:
>>daffodils dancing on a polished table,
>>snowdrops smiling in a crystal vase,
>>AND freesia sighing perfume IN the hall.
>>Most of all there should be Roses
>>singing out undying love.
>>
>>But all I have INSTEAD
>is two packets of seeds.
>>
>>
>>Sally James
>>
>
>
>
>ORIGINAL:
>
>
>>Seeds of love
>>
>>There should be flowers in my house today
>>daffodils dancing on a polished table
>>snowdrops smiling in a crystal vase
>>freesia sighing perfume into the hall.
>>Most of all there should be Roses
>>singing out undying love.
>>
>>But all I have is two packets of seeds.
>>
>>
>>Sally James
>>
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