better Caleb! definitely. the last line does lack finality, but not crucially.
KS
On 08/02/07, Caleb Cluff <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Can a day so full of eagles
> soaring
> in ones and threes
> lack portent?
>
> Watching the black chevrons
> mark
> their soft tangents
> a plastic bag strikes us & tears past.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and
> poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of kasper salonen
> Sent: Wednesday, 7 February 2007 11:52 PM
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: Snap - Wed 7/7
>
> though there's a bit of an -ing abundance..
>
> KS
>
> On 07/02/07, Caleb Cluff <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > Can a day so full of eagles
> > soaring
> > in ones and threes
> > lack portent?
> >
> > Watching black chevrons
> > marking
> > soft tangents watching
> > a plastic bag
> >
> > Soaring.
> >
> >
> >
> >
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