I enjoyed parts 1-3 (especially the contrast between the young and the
old guy), but not 4 & 5, which seem less vivid, less immediate.
Also, when a poem starts talking about poets, poetry and professors,
I tend to think 'oh, no, here we go again'.
Janet
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Poems at Proximity:
http://www.proximity.webhop.net
The choice is between nonviolence and nonexistence.
Martin Luther King Jr.
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