Thanks Doug.
I've struggled to write over the Christmas period but am enjoying working
with this.
I'm not sure that it is quite right yet but am really pleased with the
'lift' at the end.
G'night
Tina
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From: "Douglas Barbour" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Thursday, January 11, 2007 3:34 PM
Subject: Re: snap Bass
> that final couplet sings (well, in the manner of Tom Waits, perhaps),
> after the bureaucratic mumble of the rest, Tina.
>
> Doug
> On 10-Jan-07, at 10:12 AM, Tina Bass wrote:
>
>> bureaucracy is a circle
>> punctuated by blandishments
>>
>> in animated suspension
>>
>> carefully unmarked
>>
>> cars/places/mutual deceptions
>>
>> hoicking us up
>> with their beautiful lies
>>
>>
>>
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