nice & buddhist. the end is too mild, but the second stanza especially is
quite good.
KS
On 04/01/07, Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> Then will it rain?
>
>
> Wanting to talk with you
> I went to your official residence
> and many people met me
> (staff, relatives, followers, tourists).
> All of them spoke of you
> but none could introduce us
> because you weren't there. They said
> you're not there very often.
>
> Well... maybe you're out walking somewhere
> and if I walk enough I'll meet you
> on the road. Maybe if you walk
> and I walk
> until we're both tired and thirsty
> we'll meet each other
> at the well. the water-fountain. the bar.
> The river.
>
> Then will it rain? And will we stroll together
> with our tongues out,
> catching the cool droplets and laughing?
>
> Janet
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> Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
> Poems at Proximity:
> http://www.proximity.webhop.net
>
> You cannot love alone
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