I liked the pear.
It's the hen I want to delete!
Janet
> thank you for the feedback Fred; so swift too!
>
> will take you up on that first suggestion, I think. & the one on the last
> two lines as well. on the fence with letting the pear go.
> the reference to the quote may not be especially effective, I just liked it.
> and pears are usually kept in the kitchen, right?
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Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
Poems at Proximity:
http://www.proximity.webhop.net
The choice is between nonviolence and nonexistence.
Martin Luther King Jr.
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