thanks Douglas. I treat linebreaks like any other item in the toolbox, used
only when necessary.
KS
On 13/12/06, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> a nice turn at the end, Kasper
>
> but why did your snap come all tied together, when this one came in
> nice lineations...?
>
> Doug
> On 13-Dec-06, at 3:02 AM, kasper salonen wrote:
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> > leafblowers are nifty.
> >
> > week as a windfighter
> >
> > Leaves tossed like collected wings
> > into muddles of blood
> >
> > Leaves shattered out of dry piles
> > by cold nudges of petrol
> >
> > Leaves wrapped in bent sails
> > around a briar's clutch
> >
> > Leaves colouring a cityscene
> > with messy toothmarks
> >
> > Leaves rot-caking spring grass
> > in smithereens
> >
> > Leaves heaving sideways & up
> > from battling gusts
> >
> > Leaves nothing
> > but metaphors
> >
> > KS
> >
> >
> Douglas Barbour
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>
> If
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> a city is an invention
> why are we not there
>
> Kathleen Fraser
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