the sibilant sussurant suspects slimed slippery and ... ... sloped sloppily
On 11/16/06, Patrick Mc Manus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Douglas---I got hit by a sudden susurrus on the way back from the library
> leaves everywhere
> Liked 'bracketed by puddles' I read first bracketed in puddles
> P susurrussed P
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and
> poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Douglas Barbour
> Sent: 16 November 2006 02:33
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: Delayed Snapshot 15 November 02006
>
> actually 11 X 06, which is why it's delayed. I did write a few, on
> Wednesdays, while away; this is one.
>
> snap: after the storm:
>
> bracketed by puddles
> the leaf-carpeted path
> stretches brightly off
>
> the fresh clear water
> also strewn
> with glowing orange
> & umber leaves
>
> & among that colour
> full glitter reflections
> of slim trunks dark sky
> a sudden susurrus
> & a few more drift slowly down
>
> Cambridge Ontario 11 X 06
>
> Douglas Barbour
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> You may allow me moments
> not monuments, I being
> content. It is little,
> but it is little enough.
>
> John Newlove
>
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