final line is falccid-dramatic. fullstops after short lines repeated
are drama queens.
the rest is lovely though. quite empty really, but that's possibly the point.
KS
On 26/10/06, sharon brogan <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >
> > Cat on my shoulder,
> > dog at my knee, I live
> > amidst amulets, icons,
> >
> > paintings by unknown
> > artists, carvings by
> > Indonesian strangers,
> >
> > figures that invoke
> > religions that are not
> > mine; spirit that is.
> >
> > Leaves come down
> > in a clatter of color.
> > The windchimes ring.
> >
>
> --
> ~ SB =^..^=
>
> http://www.sbpoet.com
>
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