Would agree with Doug, Tina. Language with a live animal character to it.
Stephen V
http://stephenvincent.net/blog/
> I like the direction your recent poems are taking Tina. The first half
> of this gets to me more than most of the last part, but the last few
> lines catch back up.
>
> Doug
> On 11-Sep-06, at 1:46 PM, Tina Bass wrote:
>
>> paper offering
>>
>> promises for unemployed
>>
>> unemployables for building
>>
>> bombs amazing
>>
>> what a can't
>>
>> and I remain.
>>
>> seated arse-cheeks
>>
>> flattening across
>>
>> economy
>>
>> shit
>>
>> and it is raining
>>
>> still still raining
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>> falling hard
>>
>> against
>>
>> still
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>> cold
>>
>> left side pressed against
>>
>> an ancient rad - burning
>>
>> I. am in constant
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>> in continent
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>> impudent
>>
>> no! speaking
>>
>> for what is left?
>>
>> for what is right?
>>
>> a thought a simple
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>> worrying worrying question
>>
>> bits bombs paper scribbled
>>
>> countless meaning nothing
>>
>> whatsoever. absolutely.
>>
>>
>>
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> Where philosophy stops, poetry is impelled to begin. He was
> a man, far away from home, biting his nails at destiny.
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