This is different for you, Judy, & I like the experimentation on your
part here.... But I liked the distance of it all, which was compromised
a bit by the 'our' there....
Doug
On 21-Sep-06, at 8:03 PM, judy prince wrote:
> The Cathedral
>
> dead queue death-owned hall
> palmsclasp stonyheaven stares
> false paradise still figures
> stiff tapestry
> glassglare
> our passion overthrows reason
> children push seedsrainblown
> caress ancient faces
> chipped nose leadloose window
> crevice smiles mosaic skyholes
> marble feet incline birdperches
> hear clearchants greening arches
>
>
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