Enjoyed it, Andrew, and I'd put 'their' there...
Doug
On 16-Sep-06, at 8:59 PM, andrew burke wrote:
> I tried an 'upside-down' sonnet recently. I proffer it for your
> entertainment (and wonder if you could respond whether it should be
> 'the' in the last line or 'their'):
>
> An Upside-down Sonnet
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