hehehe.
the idea of the challenge is to write one poem in 5 minutes, to
exercise imagecontrol &c. up for repetition I guess, but I did it just
the once. what I was looking for was a thought or two on the poem
itself, but mkay.
cheery hippos!
K S
On 02/09/06, Patrick Mc Manus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Well Kasper to spell it out clearly for the young did you write another did
> you write another 287 poems that day
> 'playing chicken' a dare game running across roads
> And we twitchers object to snails eating birds being called stupid
> IS THAT CLEAR???
> BESTS FROM RAGNAROK PARK -NOW RAINING CHEERIPPOS UNKA p
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and
> poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Kasper
> Sent: 01 September 2006 11:40
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: instantpoem
>
> what
>
> On 01/09/06, Patrick Mc Manus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > Kasper what happened the other 23hours and 55minutes that day??
> > Were the snails playing chicken??Why were the birds stupid??
> > Cheers P unka P
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and
> > poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Kasper
> > Sent: 31 August 2006 22:42
> > To: [log in to unmask]
> > Subject: instantpoem
> >
> > written for an 'instant poetry' challenge just a moment ago (the time
> > limit was 5min).
> >
> > "nine"
> >
> > nine sorry steps
> > snake soles over
> > a bridge of distance¯
> >
> > tennis?
> > the dry shuffle of a dare?
> >
> > I haven't watched the road
> > for days, I haven't watched
> > the snails on their eerie pilgrimages
> > for whole days, wait,
> > weeks.
> >
> > they forget every inch they kiss
> > dirtily over, or are eaten
> > by stupid birds.
> >
> >
> > K S
> >
>
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