Tina - just a suggestion: if you know that some ignoramuses are gunna class
it as a 'haiku' in this three-line shape, why not break the last line after
'make' and end with 'a good cut' ? It's an okay line, and emphasises the
point nicely.
Andrew
On 20/08/06, Tina Bass <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Animosity toward Irish Stew
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> It's not the potatoes
> but sharp bone-pieces:
> chops don't make a good cut
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