Thanks for that.
I spelt Mariann the same way as someone whom I'm currently interested
in. Oh hum.
Roger
On 8/24/06, Frederick Pollack <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Roger Day" <[log in to unmask]>
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Thursday, August 24, 2006 7:04 AM
> Subject: Snap: August 24, 1944
>
>
> > Reason has a band
> > again
> > returned from the grave
> > playing all those high
> > liberation notes
> > only small dogs
> > and philosophers
> > can hear
> > as they turn in their sleep
> > beneath tall rooftops
> > Mariann drifts
correction: >>Marianne<<
> > through their dreams
> > confetti and smiles
> > a small coda
> > to be worked out later
> >
> Really tight and sharp. Bold and effective to bring in la Marianne.
>
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