reads very promisingly until the ending which spells it out
alarmingly. if spelling out is to be done it should feel more natural
than this does to me.
engaging setup though, digging that.
KS
On 26/07/06, andrew burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> the book is out
> and now the court
> is booked
>
> a duel
> would be cheaper
> maids-in-waiting
>
> mopping brows
> and tut-tutting
> in chorus
>
> should we appoint
> a court jester?
>
> the joke is on
> the author as
> publisher's fool
>
> --
> Andrew
> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
> http://www.bam.com.au/andrew
>
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