On my reading, I'd agree with you here, Alison.
I liked the first stanza for its explicit statement of desire for...
Doug
On 7-May-06, at 5:49 PM, Alison Croggon wrote:
> I realise my own comments are probably problematic: but aside from
> asserting
> "I want...", it seems to me to be saying something else, which is
> explicitly
> not about seduction or being seduced, but about some kind of raw
> desire.
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