Thanks Barry
I have to say that I always hope to work for the sound but wholly by
ear, without any thought along the lines you lay out (for which
thinking, much thanks).
Doug
On 4-May-06, at 11:56 AM, Barry Alpert wrote:
> Doug, I admire the music of the consonants (and to some extent the
> vowels)
> rendered by close proximity in both this week's snap and its precedent
> "old
> fashioned snap". The ascending number of lines per stanza in last
> week's
> snap nicely enacts organic growth, while the linebreaks in the
> continuation
> making possible that striking line "scribed by photo" open up a
> magnified
> perspective into the process for the reader. Barry
>
>
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