Doug, I admire the music of the consonants (and to some extent the vowels)
rendered by close proximity in both this week's snap and its precedent "old
fashioned snap". The ascending number of lines per stanza in last week's
snap nicely enacts organic growth, while the linebreaks in the continuation
making possible that striking line "scribed by photo" open up a magnified
perspective into the process for the reader. Barry
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